Need to check for some grammar errors and rephrase sentences better. Learn to make a running header and create a proper APA cover page. Need to provide direction in my explanation like explaining the figure images in steps and describe one part to another. The transition between paragraphs is a bit off, needs a better transition. Need to sum up each paragraph better at the last sentence.

-This was a free write I wrote about changes that needed to be made in my technical description paper. I’m pointing out the flaws of my writing, doing so, I can pinpoint the changes that needed to be made.

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